November 5, 2009

What Can I Say


What can I say about a God who loves me?

How can I prove His sweetness for me?

Which words would do Him justice?

I’m scared to even try.

I know I’ll fall short.

But He meets my shabby effort with the mighty force of His glory.

I reach out my insignificant hand, and He grabs it with His majesty.

He pulls me into His constant joy, and I dance! – I dance! – I dance!

I’m surrounded by physical prison; my flesh locks me into ordinary.

But with God I run in a ray of beauty and lie down in a bed of peace.

My love is multiplied in my emptiness and I find safety in my fear.

God lifts high my brokenness and His light shines through my life.

I know I’ll fall short.

I’m scared to even try.

Which words would do Him justice?

How can I prove His sweetness for me?

What can I say about a God who loves me?



*Author's note: I was doing my God-time, and God told me to write Him a poem. I didn't know what I was going to write, except to share how much I am loved by my Creator. When I was finished writing, I centered the poem and a cross appeared. Isn't God so wonderful? He reminds me all the time that I am loved. When I am obedient to His urging, He leads me right into His arms.


25 comments:

Lindsey Riddle said...

That's amazing.

Crissy said...

Beautiful poem and how cool that God shaped it like a cross!!!

DutchMom31 said...

How Beautiful! And what a gift to God and then back to you.

Corrie Howe said...

Very cool! I am constantly amazed by God and his interactions with me. Thanks for your support. It means a lot. I just have to tell you I keep coming back over and over again to your comment about being God's flashlight in the dark corners of the Internet for your guest post on Midday Escapades. I loved the title "Blogger's Hell."

T. J. Knowlton said...

Alisa, that is beautiful. Love is multiplied in my emptiness...well said. Have a great weekend.

Teri said...

WOW! ...Beautiful!!!

Crystal said...

Wow - Gave me goosebumps!

Karen said...

This is beautiful! Especially liked the line...

"But with God I run in a ray of beauty and lie down in a bed of peace."

What a sweet reminder from the Lord of His love!

Debbie said...

This is a wonderful poem! Very inspiring.

Warren Baldwin said...

What can we say about a God who loves us? "Thank you, Father!" Good poem.

Melinda said...

He is so sweet ... that is so beautiful. I love it when He gives me "little" surprises like that!:0)

Gaia said...

God is like that, but sure hope he does not get too upset when we are a little disobedient. :D

strokeofliving said...

The Lord knows how to speak to you and how to direct you. This is incredible how this beautiful poem turned out visually.

Cassandra Frear said...

I like seeing your passion for God.

Christian Mommy Writer said...

That was beautiful! I loved the cross that was revealed after you were done!

Anonymous said...

Jen Keller says, " wow, thank you Jesus for using Alisa as a vessel to show me who I am in You." great poem Alisa, thank you for being obedient, those blessings of obedience are overflowing to all us girls.

alicia said...

That was a beautiful poem about our amazing God, and the fact that He made a cross...perfect.

Cherie Hill said...

Wanted to say Happy Birthday Alisa...it's my son's birthday too! (9 years old and the years are going fast!)Hope you are abundantly blessed by the Lord's peace and love!
With joy,
Cherie

Deborah Ann said...

Wow! How awesome is that, God made your poem in the form of a cross! That is way too cool...

Bernadine said...

What can I say... just beautiful!

Warren Baldwin said...

Read it again. It was good the second time, too! Good job.

~*Michelle*~ said...

beautiful.....simply beautiful

This made my heart skip a beat:

"But with God I run in a ray of beauty and lie down in a bed of peace."

what a gorgeous image you are leaving in my heart/soul right now.

OceanDreams said...

Beautiful poem, I love learning about the love of God and it is never comprehensible to me, that is what makes it so beautiful.

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